Our teacher's feedback

Today we got some feedback from our teacher about our nearly finished work. She told us the camera work and the editing were very good and the length of the piece is ok by now, as Tom shortened the title. However, our music caused different reactions, some people liked it and some -our teacher included - thought it was a bit too sentimental for a horror film so we want to use the few days left changing the music and we might add some more sound effects as well.

Roles

Actors: Tom - Max
Ben - Ben
Cameraman: Phil
Editor: Tom
Producer: Tom
Director: Phil

Todays Lesson

In today's lesson our teacher showed our rough cut to our classmates so that we could get some feedback on how to improve it.

We discovered that so far there isn't enough tension, so music or quick cuts could improve this. There also needs to be some titles to make it feel as if it is a film opening and also they thought that the title of 'Sinwood' may have been a bit too long.